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100-Page Manuscript Critique
$575Win this critique and have an industry expert read your work! Get the first 100 pages of your manuscript critiqued by author Erin Entrada Kelly, a New York Times bestseller and Newbery Medalist!
Erin Entrada Kelly is a Newbery Medalist and New York Times bestseller. She teaches in the MFAC program at Hamline University and has worked as an editor and book publicist. To learn more, visit www.erinentradakelly.com.
Image: A headshot of Erin Entrada Kelly.
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PB Critique by Sope Martins
$75Win a written picture book critique from bestselling picture book author Sope Martins. Her first publication became her publisher's fastest-selling book in their history.
Sope Martins is a writer with a background in radio and television broadcasting. Her first publication, a picture book titled The Greatest Animal in the Jungle, went on to become the fastest-selling book in the publisher's history, as well as a bestseller. Since then, she has worked with different initiatives to create four more picture books, and has a chapter book and another picture book out in December 2021.
When she's not writing, reading, or accidentally killing her house plants, you can find her out and about in the bustling city of Lagos, Nigeria, and online at www.sopemartins.com.
Image: A headshot of Sope Martins.
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Picture Book Critique
$95Win a critique of non-rhyming, fiction picture book of 800 words or less from award-winning Brazilian children's author Ana Siqueira. Ana has mentored three writers so far, and all three have gotten publishing deals or agent representation!
Ana Siqueira is a Spanish-language elementary teacher, an award-winning Brazilian children's author, and a published author in the Foreign Language educational market. Her debut picture book is BELLA'S RECIPE FOR DISASTER/SUCCESS (Beaming Books, 2021), Her forthcoming books are IF YOUR BABYSITTER IS A BRUJA/ CUANDO TU NIÑERA ES UNA BRUJA (SimonKids,2022), ABUELA'S SUPER CAPA/LA SUPER CAPA DE ABUELA (HarperCollins 2023) from a two-book deal auction (the second book can't be announced yet). Ana is a member of SCBWI, Las Musas Book, and co-founder of LatinxPitch.
Ana is a Local PBS Media Innovator, 2016, and a trained Global Educator. Find more about her and her books at https://anafiction.com/
You can follow Ana on
Twitter https://twitter.com/SraSiqueira1307
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Goodreads - https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/20267025.Ana_Siqueira
Pinterest: https://www.pinterest.com/asiqueira1307/_saved/
Image: A headshot of Ana Siqueira.
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MG Critique by Sonja Thomas
$45Win a critique of the first 10 pages of your Middle Grade Manuscript by middle grade author Sonja Thomas.
Sonja Thomas (she/her) writes stories for kids of all ages, often featuring brave, everyday girls doing extraordinary things. Raised in Central Florida-home of the wonderful world of Disney, humidity, and hurricanes-and a Washington, DC, transplant for eleven years (go Nats!), she's now "keeping it weird" in the Pacific Northwest. She's a contributing author for Good Night Stories for Rebel Girls: 100 Real-Life Tales of Black Girl Magic and her debut middle grade novel Sir Fig Newton and the Science of Persistence releases March 15, 2022 from Aladdin/Simon & Schuster. Visit her online at www.BySonjaThomas.com.
Image: A headshot of Sonja Thomas.
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Critique & Call w/ Agent
$205Win a consultation with agent, former librarian, and writer Leslie Zampetti of Dunham Literary! Leslie will provide a written critique of your query letter and the first five pages of your manuscript (or complete picture book text), as well as a follow-up 30-minute call to discuss feedback and/or publishing questions.
Materials to be submitted any time after January 7, 2022. (Date and time of critique and call to be negotiated with winner). Offer of critique and call expires January 31, 2023.
After experience as a librarian and writer, Leslie Zampetti became a literary agent. Her clients' books include SET ME FREE (LeZotte, Scholastic, 2021) and THE SINGER AND THE SCIENTIST (Rose, Kat-Ben, 2021). For children's books, Leslie represents picture books through young adult. For adults, Leslie is seeking both fiction and narrative nonfiction, though not politics, political thrillers or inspirational stories. You can find Leslie online at @literarylesliez and http://www.dunhamlit.com
Image: Leslie Zampetti headshot
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Critique & Call w/ Kim Baker
$85Win a critique for your middle grade writing from author Kim Baker! Kim will critique the first 25 pages of your middle grade manuscript plus (optional) synopsis. She will provide written notes, revision resources, and a 30-minute follow up Zoom call to workshop your story and/or talk about publishing, cute dogs, best cookie recipes, etc.
No expiration.
Kim Baker's first middle grade novel, Pickle, has been selected for many reading lists and was a finalist for the CBC Children's Choice Book of the Year. Her second book, The Water Bears, was chosen by Kirkus and Bank Street as one of their best children's books of 2020. Find out more at www.kimbakerbooks.com.
Image: Kim Baker headshot
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Picture Book Critique & Call
$190Win a picture book manuscript consultation from editor Deborah Halverson! Deborah will critique your fully written picture book, following up with a 20-minute call.
Deborah Halverson is the founder of the popular writers' advice site DearEditor.com and the award-winning author of Writing Young Adult Fiction for Dummies and Writing New Adult Fiction, the teen novels Big Mouth and Honk If You Hate Me, the picture book Letters to Santa, and three books in the Remix series for struggling readers. She was an editor at Harcourt Children's Books and is now a freelance editor specializing in Young Adult/Middle Grade fiction, New Adult fiction, and picture books. Deborah has worked with authors-bestsellers, veterans, debut, and aspiring-for twenty-five years. She also serves on the advisory board for the UC San Diego Extension "Children's Book Writing and Illustrating" certificate program. www.DeborahHalverson.com
Image: A headshot of Deborah Halverson.
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Pro Edits & Sensitivity Read
$100Win a round of editing from author Robert Kingett! Robert will provide content edits for a short story or a novel excerpt up to 20,000 words, especially if you are a Disabled writer. Robert will utilize his professional sensitivity reading and anthology editing experience to polish your works of art featuring Disabled characters that are in progress.
Minimum one-month turnaround time due to limited spoons.
Robert Kingett is an award-winning Blind author and essayist that's been published in many outlets, including international journals and media outlets. His work has appeared in many popular podcasts such as Mortified Chicago. He's edited many anthologies with other Disabled authors and has advocated for Disabled writers to be included in all aspects of the publishing industry. His website is https://blindjournalist.wordpress.com/
Image: Artificial Divide Anthology cover, edited by Robert Kingett and Randy Lacey